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At the time that I wrote this I was finishing up the second to last book of the Maximum Ride Series by James Patterson. I really loved it. I am writing this on an app call WattPad. 
Here is what I have so far. Comment below what you think and if you think that I should keep going.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I knew they were right around the corner. No matter what, I had to do something about what they were doing to her and her friends. I could hear the screaming and cries of pain that seemed never ending. I almost couldn't take it any more. So I peeked around the corner and what I had seen in that moment was something that I will never forget. There was blood everywhere and the girl was by the wall cowering in fear and soaked in blood. Man I hate the sight of blood. Now that I got a good look at the situation that was going on, I now knew that it had went too far this time. What I did next was pretty much all reflex. I ran as fast I could and spread my wings at the last second and ascended into the air, right before I ran into them little bastards, just to give them a little adrenaline boost. As I lifted into the air, I flew in small circles right above their reach so that they couldn't do to me what they had done to that poor girl.
  • Listening to: Over Misty Mountains Cold ~ The Hobbit
  • Reading: Warriors: StarClans Path.... Super Edition
  • Watching: DeviantArt Activity
  • Playing: Uncharted 3: Drakes Deception
  • Eating: Honey Barbecue Lays Chips
  • Drinking: SunnyD: Smooth

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Dylan Manning
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United States
I love to draw and write stories to what I draw and I'm only fifteen. Sadly im not professional but I guess I'm pretty good since my friends think so. I created a club in second grade called "The Freehanders". If you think you've got what it takes let me know and I'll make you a member of the club.
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Fyrrea Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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Thanks for your support La la la la I'm very happy you liked my art!
Have an awesome day Hug,
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Izunichi Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the watch, I appreciate it ;v;
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FenRox Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch. :devwatch: 
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LennoraSilverstone Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you SO much for the watch! Make sure to stay tuned for my, soon to come, free erotic novel! ;) (Wink)
If you'd like to support my work further, you can visit my Patreon and chip in, gaining various perks Heart
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Thanks for watching!
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ErikaVerkaaik Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
thank you so much for the watch :huggle:
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Thank you for watching me! Oh my goodness, it means so much! <3
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seika Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015   Artist
thanks for the llama!

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CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for all those favs man!
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Thanks for the watch and llama!!! :3
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Thank you so much for donation to my pool!
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yes i would be aseep
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intheskygirl Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
hey thanks for the donation :D
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Thank you for the watch!!!:heart::tighthug:
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AlexandeNight Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for the watch! and the llama! 
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thank you very much for the point excited happy 
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ZyraAngel Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
thanks so much for the llama and the watch! it means a lot!
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CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, thanks for the devwatch! 

Can this otaku have a reason?
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